Sunday, November 8, 2009

NaNoWriMo

I'm not participating in NaNo.


Firstly, I feel that writing 50,000 words in a month is asking for error, I've achieved similar goals, but the quality of my work was lacking. I like to focus on having well crafted writing, so that I can avoid spending hours rewriting and working on something I've already written. I dislike rewriting and editing, so, the less I can do, the better off I'll be.


Second, with the way I'm working now, I can't commit to it, because it just won't happen. I'm focusing on The Darkling Legacy, at the moment. As it holds the most promise as far as publication might be concerned. But, what I'm doing with it doesn't exactly jive with writing 50,000 words. Why? Because I'm Editing.... 6 chapters and roughly 10,000 words of gloriously misstyled writing lies in the pages of my book. Misstyled in that TDL is essentially a speculative/sci-fi work, which calls for a certain tone of writing, which is different from the tone that a romance novel requires, or a fantasy novel. So, first, my tone was, not wrong, but not right, it worked, but not all the time, so I'm updating that. 

And my skill level has increased, so I want that to be contiguous through the whole thing so that I have to do less drastic editing later on. 

I'm also trying something new, a style of writing that dives into Donovan's head far more than before, creating entirely new passages, and presenting the setting, and him, in an interesting way.

oh, and picking out stupid mistakes.

So, all of that is a fair amount of work to do, and I go slowly (evil, vile, me), I can edit for hours, once I get going, but it's that initial start that hinders me. I'm getting better about it, though, and I've done quite a bit, but I'm working on what will be close to 4000 words of the 10,000, so I have much more to do. It's not conducive to voluminous amounts of writing, because I'm not producing anything new. 

When I'm done with it, I will start writing Chapter 7, and the story will start picking up, and we get taken off on an adventure with Donovan and Cory, but it's a long road to get there.


maybe someday I'll do NaNo, but not this year.


Robert W. Nance

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Update on the road of writing

I haven't posted here since March, for that, I offer no apology, I have had nothing written that I felt good about posting for all to see on the Internet. And so, there have been no posts, but I don't think I have any readers to begin with.

Anyhow, I'm back, but not with any new writing, I'm changing up the way I use this blog, I think I'll start posting about how my writing is moving along, and from time to time post an excerpt.

A good friend of mine, RS Hawley, has linked to this site, so I figure I better start using it.

RS Hawley has been published, her first book, entitled A Vengeance, was released at the beginning of September. It is a very good story, epic and enchanting. The characters drew me in shortly after their introductions, and I jumped back to the book at every opportunity to read.

Anyway, on to what this site shall be.


My last post was the second part of the opening of a brand new, untitled, fantasy story. It is still untitled, but now it's more of a project. Character and world development has lead this from a one book story, to a multi book saga. I've scrapped the opening I posted, and I've started over, working with a concept that introduces the whole storyline better

Heath is a man for hire, sort of. He works for kings and lords all across the world, but with the stipulation that his work be in opposition to the Lord of the north, Legionarior. So when the alliance of free peoples receive word of a plot most foul being prepared by the Lord of the North, Heath jumps at the chance to help prevent it, but the alliance has other plans, in the form of Elven Maiden, Donava Neverwood...

That's the first book's teaser. I'm enjoying the process of writing it, I haven't done much in the fantasy genre for several years, and I'm learning that it really is the most open ended I've worked with, so much possibility.


My other project is The Darkling Legacy, the first draft of the first chapter was posted here when I first conceived the story. It's by far my favorite story I've ever come up with. It deals with Donovan Nevil, and his search for some sort of treasure left behind by his best friend just before the world fell to pieces under a barrage of chemical bombs. It's been 28 years since that day, by Donovan's count, and he lives alone in a barren, dangerous land, scraping out a living as best he can, half-heartedly searching for this mysterious object. But it's not until the arrival of a strange young man with a connection to his past that Donovan takes impetus and sets out in earnest, and discovers along the way that his long dead best friend's treasure may very well be the darkling salvation of humanity.

I'm working on editing what I have of this one to a standard and style on par with what I'll be finishing it with, and I need to get myself really motivated to do that! it's difficult to do.

That's it for now, I might be back in a couple of days to give you all a look at my two main characters, Heath and Donovan.


Until then,

Robert W. Nance

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Heath's continuing adventure

If you're in the writer's guild, go no further, I plan on reading this Saturday night. This is a direct follow up to the previous post, so read that first.

RW Nance

The Dragunhawk set down in the windless valley of Dauc Mareau, and Heath slid from its back, running quickly through the shadowed dead grasses to the tower Dar Nord.
 The tower was just that, a tower on a hill, one of four around the valley, and by far the best of them. It was bleak, blasted smooth on the side facing the valley and the chasm therein. The sense of foreboding that covered the tower pervaded the valley as well, emanating from the black, scar-like, chasm from which the valley took its name.
 Auburn clouds hung overhead, as they did at all times, hiding the valley from the sight of the sky. The wind never blew here, not a breath of stirring air. Gloom hung on the place like a blanket, but Heath preferred his abode in the tower, far from any kingdom, or, indeed, any land men dared tread.
 He mounted the stone steps past the empty rooms all the way up the tower until he reached the uppermost. The one window in the room faced to the west, letting in a shaft of light into the dusty chamber. A trapdoor was fixed into the ceiling, allowing access to the lookout, a place Heath rarely went, and his bed looked as though no one had slept there for weeks. It was, in fact, so, Heath hadn’t been here in weeks, and so he slumped onto his bed without removing his cloak.
 Drifting in and out of a semi consciousness, the man rested as best he could. He was awoken by a loud squawk after a few minutes. Looking up at the desk below his window, Heath’s gaze rested on a hideous bird-like beast. Only at the very last moment did he remember not to meet its eyes.
 “What do you want?” he asked the bird.
 “Greetings, Sadlin-al-emre-yiterra,” is said with a slight whistling accent, “I bear a letter for you.”
 “A letter from who?” Heath asked, staring at the desktop.
 “Cudro.” it stated.
 Heath sighed, “Leave it on the desk, and go, so I can read it without turning to stone.”
 The bird thing cackled, and jumped off the desk, waddling into the room, “Cudro asked that I watch to you read it. He said it was rather important.”
 Heath growled, and pulled out the chair at his desk, removing his hood and face covering as he sat. The bird thing coughed, with a sort of disgusted tone, as he did this, and Heath made himself not turn around.
 Dear Sadlin,
 
 A dinner of state has arisen, the king of the Wood Elves, and the Grey Sprite chief have forgone their fears, and come to our palace to talk of an alliance in the waning days of peace. 
 Legionarior, as you of all peoples should know, has gained massive holdings in the North, and has once again pressed South.
 The king and the chief would take kindly to your presence, It would give them a sense of ease among our people, and you have no dearth of experience with the so-called dark lord.
 
~ Cudro


 Heath set the letter on the desk, “There’s more. Isn’t there?”
 “Of course,” The bird thing gagged, “Cudro wouldn’t put it in a letter, though, you know that.”
 Frowning, Heath pulled his face mask back up, “Go tell Cudro I read the letter, and that I’ll be there tomorrow.”
 The bird thing hopped back up on the desk, and out the narrow window without a word.
 The man didn’t watch it go, stupid creature, he thought to himself as he took a long, pink, silk scarf out of a chest, and bound it around his eyes. He stood at the door, and swept over the room, leaving it much as he’d found it less than an hour earlier. 
 Pulling his hood up, he passed under the doorway inscribed Dar Nord, and strode through the hip-high listless grasses away to the southwest.
 Once the sight of his tower home was gone, the clouds dissipated, exposing him to the sun, and the harsh winds that ripped across these plain. A Dragunhawk alighted silently behind him, and again in a language unintelligible, comprised more of growls and clicks than of syllables, spoke to him.
 “I would have need of you to bear me.” Heath explained to the beast, “If I were going anywhere you would bear me.”
 The Dragunhawk tilted its head to the side, and gave a small growl.
 “Am I right in remembering that you and your kin have no dealings with the Gorgons?”
 The Dragunhawk gave what seemed to be a frown, and a growl.
 Heath bowed his head for a moment, “Then I’m afraid you may only bear me to the farmhouse 4 miles ahead, though I think it best that you not, the farmer is not used to the sight of you.”
 The beast nodded, and took to the sky, driving itself beyond Heath’s sight. Heath, however, continued plodding along at his brisk, tireless pace. Until at last he came to the farmhouse as the sun began its hiding.
 The farmer stepped out onto the porch of his small cottage-like home, an axe held slack in one hand, “What’s yer biznis here?” he asked.
 “Horse, Eatel, I need my horse.”
 “Heath?” the farmer asked.
 Heath nodded in reply as he stood at the foot of the bottom step.
 “You ass.” the farmer continued, “I’m not watching yer horse fer free.”
 Heath didn’t answer, but threw a small sack at the farmer’s face, “That should more than cover it, now, where’s my horse?”
 The farmer’s eyes grew as he emptied the sack, several gold coins and diamonds fell into his hand, “This way.”
 The enamored farmer led Heath around to his stable, where two horses stood under a small overhang. Heath nodded to the farmer, and stepped up to the darker of the two. He caressed its face, speaking to it in a slow-syllabled tongue. Mounting bareback, Heath kicked open the gate, walked his horse up to the farmer, and kicked him in the face.
 “You take care of him next time.”
 The farmer nodded from the ground, stunned, and bleeding, and watched Heath gallop off into the south.
  * * *

 Riding all night was not Heath’s idea of restful, nor of enjoyment, but it had to be done. He entered Gorgon lands with the rising sun, and left his horse at the border.
 “You don’t know enough to survive here.” He told it, before letting it loose, and turning towards some distant spires.
 Scrub brush adorned this countryside, dotted about with stone figures, here a weathered elf, or a lion-like form. Some so old they were little but a mound of rock under a bush.
 Heath shuddered, he despised this part of the journey, every step reminding him that his friends the Gorgons were far from safe, and one movement in error could cost him his very soul.
 Two of the snake-headed peoples stood at the gate as Heath walked up, making no attempt to not meet his gaze. The man, however, refused to meet theirs, even with his silken scarf tied across his eyes.
 “What brings you here, man?” they asked in unison.
 “The Lord Cudro has summoned me.”
 “Your name?”
 “Your people call me Sadlin.”
 At the name they both stiffened, and signaled the gate to be opened. Heath walked through, he knew the power this name had over the Gorgons, but he hadn’t a clue what the influence was about, or why it worked on them like it did.
 The buildings beyond the gate were magnificent, arches abounded among the various multitude of colors. The people, however, were, at least to Heath, hideous, their skin was graying from a bronze color like a sailor, to a sickly paleness. Most stood at his height, and their flattened noses gave them a more rounded head. But the most prominent feature was their hair, comprised entirely of snakes, hissing and snapping. Snakes of all variety and color, Heath kept his distance from the people, and avoided meeting any gaze, he was still distrusting of his only shield.
 There was no one to guide the man through the dizzying and deadly streets, but from the few times he’d been here he remembered how to find Cudro’s home.
 It too was gated, a spacious mansion, built more into the air than across the ground. Heath called at the gate, and was allowed in, led by a thin Gorgon who acted as Cudro’s servant.
 The servant announced the man, and he was shown to Cudro’s office, a curious room, full of stone figures, again Heath shuddered.
 “Thank you for coming, Sadlin.” Cudro said, “How have you been?”
 Heath stood for a moment, “I’ve been well, not gotten much rest.”
 “Busy…” Cudro mused, “What have you been doing?”
 “I tracked Legionarior to the desert temple, he had the Cedrin Rammor, but I stole it from him and destroyed it.”
 Cudro’s face bore a shocked expression for a moment, not that Heath saw, “You destroyed the Cedrin Rammor?”
 “Yes, Cudro, I did, burnt it to ashes and left it to be buried with the temple.”
 The Gorgon closed his eyes for a moment, and Heath chanced a look, “Sadlin, that was a powerful book, and many secrets lived in its pages. But now…”
 “For the best, I stopped Legionarior from getting those secrets.”
 “Sadlin…” the Gorgon started, his voice thick with anger, and a hint of lust.
 “What does it mean?” Heath asked, “Sadlin-al-emre-yiterra.”
 “That too was in the book.”
 Heath glared at the wall beside Cudro’s head, “What does it mean?”
 Cudro sat quietly for a moment, “You’ll find out soon enough.”
 “Where may I rest?” Heath asked, straining his words to show his unhappiness.
 “My servant will show you the way.”
 As though beckoned, the servant entered the room, and Heath followed him, at a distance, out. Up to a small room, where the man locked the door from the inside, and, without removing a thing, collapsed onto the bed.


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Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Meet Heath

Meet Heath, I had a dream the other night, and this guy was in it, and yes his name is most assuradly and unchangably 'Heath'. So, anyhow, I've been trying to figure out who he is for a while, and I think I finally got some of it, so, my new piece:

Chapter 1

 The wind swept across the desert sand dunes with an incessant fury. Inexplicably, the wind bent itself full force on a large temple, wrought of stone, laying forgotten in the vast waste of Garaning.
 Inexplicably, that is, to anyone who may have stumbled upon the lonely place, but to the 2 men within, the fury of the wind was easily explained. One, a towering dark, lordly, man, whose face was adorned with tribal markings from the far north, bore a red leather bound book under his right arm, and a long black sword in the other. The other man was tightly hooded and cloaked, his eyes alone visible in the narrow opening of his hood, blocked the way of the tall one, sword held ready in his gloved right hand.
 “You fool!” shouted the tall man, “This temple is coming down on us, we’ll be buried alive by the desert!”
 “That’s the price to be paid for taking the book.” The cloaked man calmly replied.
 “Move!” the tall one screamed, “Or you’ll perish with me!”
 “You may have found, Legionarior, I’m difficult to kill.”
 “I dare say you are, like a swarm of gnats, I cannot fully crush you. So, if you won’t move…” Legionarior sprung forward, shielding the book from possible damage.
 The sound of steel filled the hall, drowning out the roaring wind outside, but not the buckling temple. On a level field Legionarior could have overcome his adversary, albeit with great effort, but here, fear was visible in his eyes, as they darted around the crumbling hall. Visible in the hooded eyes was but determination, to rid Legionarior of the book. 
 Dexterous hands wielded the blades, and negated each other, and neither point met it’s mark. Legionarior made an attempt to circle around the cloaked man, to make an attempt at escape. It seemed as though he succeeded, coming at last between the hooded man and the door, but, as he turned to take flight, the book was dislodged from his hold. The Hooded man laughed, spitted on his sword was the book, “Take flight, it’s your life, or the secrets in the book, Lord Legionarior.”
 Legionarior paused for a moment, as if in thought of going back for the book, but as the ceiling buckled yet again, he fled into the sandstorm, “**** you, Heath!”
 Heath watched him go, before turning to the book. He drew his nondescript blade from it, and slid it into the jeweled scabbard beneath his thick, dark cloak. He held the book in front of his grey eyes for a moment, studying the gilded text on the cover. He could make no sense of it, except one word, ‘Farsight’ that’s what the Gorgons called him, he thought.
 But the book itself, He had stopped Legionarior, and to finish the job, Heath removed his left glove, allowing flames to leap suddenly from his fingertips, licking at the pages, and at length, devouring the book. He threw it on the floor, pulled his glove back on, and walked away as the desert wind razed the temple to the ground.
 Outside there was not a trace of Legionarior, which was to be expected, he was far from here by now, and Heath was glad of it. He reached down to his belt, and caught up a small horn from it. Giving a blast on it summoned a great Dragunhawk, leathery and feathered, to the sands beside him.
 “Where to, my lord?” it asked in a language unintelligible, as Heath climbed up on its back.
 “Dar Nord, my friend, take me to Dar Nord.”

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